bro lustarhymes, your story is hot n quite well written. i observed tat your points hv been dwindling downwards. dunno why some bros here keep zapping u down. you are only writing a story, tat shd not hv offended anybody here, unless....... your tutor's boyfriend is also at tis forum n he got his other bros to zap you down!
anyway, i juz up u back my humble points as encouragement n appreciation. pls continue...